Jumping out of the ocean and laying down in the hot beautiful sand. It felt nice. The waves crashing hard into the rocks sounding like someone was doing a massive bomb.
There were families having fun in the ocean. People splashing water everywhere. My brothers, my mum, dad and I, were having races in the water. Also bombs and dives. I could see my reflection in the beautiful wavy ocean...
....There was a smell that was weird. It was a wet dog that just got out of the water. Shaking its body on the wet owner.
I could smell the sun screen on peoples skin.
Families playing touch on the sand. Also families and friends Camping in the camping grounds and trying their best to put up their tent.
I could smell people having barbecues as well as my family. I couldn't resist the smell, it made me go back and have some delicious food.
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I did enjoy your story. You have used good use of the senses: smells, sights, sounds. You have painted good images in my mind of a sunny beach day.
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptive story. You did a great job of using senses to create a vivid picture in my mind! well done
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